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Old 09-24-2009, 11:34 AM
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bay aitbaar shaks tha sogawaar kar gaya
lakin mere shaoor ko baidar kar gaya

kuch main nay ishtiaal main shikway gilay kiye
kuch wo shikayatain sar-e-bazar kar gaya

pehlay wo meri zaat ki tameer main raha
phir mujh ko apne hath sey mismaar kar gaya

wo aa mila tou faaslay kattay chalay gaye
bichra tou raaste mere dushwaar kar gaya.
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Old 09-27-2009, 10:13 AM
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Nice Ghazal Shinnystar75
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Old 09-27-2009, 02:45 PM
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